As a huge Macross fan myself I have to say that was pretty good. I liked your use of the movies music and sound effects. While the voices were OK I noticed that they mispronounced some words, but that pretty forgivable.
The visuals while the artwork was pretty good I don't think that they moved as well as they could have. But still a good job.
Oh and there are several sequels to Macross - the unofficial sequel 6 part OVA Macross 2, the music video Macross 2012, the TV series Macross 7, the 4 part OVA Macross Plus, the 4 part OVA Macross 7 Dynamite, and the most recent the 5 part OVA Marcross Zero. All of theses are really good and you should check them out if you haven't already.